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Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Getting into the Write State of Mind

I've been experimenting on some casual writing in an attempt to get the ball rolling on a novel that's been in seclusion for a few months. If you have any constructively critical comments, feel free to leave them. It may contain questionable, possibly objectionable content if you have a love for the history it violently re-writes.

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The young man fell to his knees and I could hear his muffled sobs escape through the fingers covering his face. Were his hands any lower, I would have imagined seeing a usually hopeful visage flexed into aged lines of despair.  He sniffled. The kind of sniffle you hear when someone is trying to revive his resolve and put on a mask of clarity and defiance.
                “You’ve seen clearly what I have brought to show you. What this will all be and what they will all become. Because of you, John. Everything your life amounted to, all the wonderful things you have tried to bring and all the people you have touched – they will reject you and you will be a broken shell of a man.” I said these, the last words he would ever hear, with a clearly defined sense of wrongness. I didn’t want to be here, lying to this man. It was because he was supposed to die-no, had already died in this concrete jungle of a city, just a few blocks away, that the vision he I showed him became a reality. Clearly, his resolve faltered under the pressure of the last few minutes. It was only ten minutes ago that John was walking briskly through these late evening New York streets with determination and confidence. On the way to meet his lovely wife he stumbled while stepping off a curb and the arm of the body I wore caught his flailing hand. Of course, that was intended. Through that contact he caught a flash of this world’s future and what it looked like. He saw the war and scandal that corrupted not just this land’s government, but that reached across the vast ocean and corrupted that of his home country and every other other so-called civilized nation. He saw the everyday squabbles of the people deteriorate into pettiness. Every hope he had ever had for the future of a world in which he strived for peace was lost in that instant. His body continued to the ground, curled into the infantile security only a womb could provide.
                “I knew it,” he said, accepting the fate that this shattering future glimpse forced upon him. Then he took the .38 special from my host’s extended hand and ended his suffering. By the time the echoes of the screaming had faded and were replaced by the sirens, I wasn’t even in the same state…

…Correction, I was still in the Big Apple. Just not on the evening of Dec. 8, 1980. It was now a brisk spring morning nearly a century later. But on 203rd floor of the towering iron spire that reached into the sky it was a crisp thirty-eight degrees Fahrenheit. I approached the woman sitting in the center of the room with my true form apparent. It was the only way to surrender myself to her complete control.
                “It is done,” I conveyed in my usual manner. I placed the words gently into her auditory cortex, so as not to overwhelm the human female’s fragile neural-cognitive system. She smiled, a wry, evil smile. A glint of light reflected off her dark eyes from the single covered bulb in the vaulted ceiling. I put the book on the table in the middle of the room, a nearly new copy of Catcher in the Rye, as proof.
                “I have another target,” she said, ignoring entirely the evidence of my deed.
                “That wasn’t our arrangement,” I told her as calmly as I could, betraying the roiling aggression beneath the surface.
                “Our arrangement has altered. Pray I don’t alter it further.” She steepled her fingers in front of her face before leaning back in her chair and then standing up. “You have the ability to give me a world that loves only me.” The gleam in her eyes shimmered and the lines on her face creased as she entertained her fantasy-come-to-life. “I have the one and only thing in this reality that you need, and I hold its existence by a thread.” I cringed. She was right, of course. Until I had fulfilled all of the desires of her madness, her complete saturation of drunken power, I would not be allowed to return to my realm whole. “You will go here,” the images in her mind swirled to a theater and a bearded man wearing a tall hat, “and bring me the play bill for ‘Our American Cousin’ as proof when you are done.”

                If I’d had teeth to bare and a brow to furrow, I would have done so. But I relented, just as John had moments before. Just like John, I knew what the future held for me if I did anything but relent to this woman, this paragon of corruption. After all, the other half of my soul was helpless in her grasp.
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So, that's page one of a work tentatively titled 'Lennon.'

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